FanFiction talk:The Art of the Hunt/Season 1/Chapter 3 - The First Day/@comment-4801778-20160229081507/@comment-5448890-20160301150155

Thank you so much for the comment! Means a lot.

It is, of course, a W.I.P. Character appearance and visual details took a backseat at the time of writing to allow for more story expansion, but I'll see what I can do.