Talk:Oxydynia/@comment-4212769-20160211144002

I'm sorry to say this but this monster isn't based on whip scorpions, it actually IS just a giant whip scorpion. There's nothing special in design, as well as in concept. It lacks creativity, it lacks possibility and it lacks MH-feeling. You can do better than that.

Also that name is a catastrophe in my opinion. Please don't just change the order of syllables of a word. That's on the level of a Pokémon name like Ekans or Arbok. A good idea would be taking words from different languages (google translator is your friend) and combine them but without taking a whole word in. Also don't overuse languages (like Spanish), as if a native speaking person looks at them the names are more or less just names made in a Pokémon-esque manner.

I don't want to offend you but giving you feedback. Don't take it personally. ^^