User blog comment:Democide/Endemic Life Contest No. 1 Vote/@comment-15446856-20190816230418


 * Democide: An excellent trio of creations with a highly detailed ecology perfectly showing what these creatures do in their environments. All three have the same characteristics and still manage to have their own unique things to separate them apart. Definitely an example for Endemic Life in general. I'm giving them a 5/5
 * FrostSpino: I really like the icons you've made for these creatures, especially Snow Phantom. They look pretty neat to see in the world and I can clearly picture them fleeing from the Cortos for some reason. Only issue is more ecology would have been preferred. I'm giving them a 4.5/5
 * Fireball13: The fly centipede thing really gives them a special kind of concept to them. Aside from some things that here and there that could have been added to make them more believable and help make them truly unique I like these things. I'm giving them a 4/5
 * Dinoman0310: I like the concepts and all, but I find that they need more to them to make them beyond larger Scalebats that have adapted into different regions and the screeching thing makes them sound more like an alternative Noios. I'm giving them a 3/5
 * Werequaza86: As I predicted your Endemic Life Creatures are birds. They sound good and all, but they take a big hit in the fact there's very little information you've given about them. Sorry Were, but I need to see the details in order to understand and appreciate these birbs. I'm giving them a '3/5
 * ElusiveSeeker: Eh, the normal species fits as Endemic Life enough but there hardly anything to it other than its mammalian traits. Though those Penguin creatures in Iceborne have a big chance to actually be Endemic Life so it knocks them down a bit. I have issues with its two subspecies. How would Irongut Penguala be able to hunt and kill Shamos when it only has a small beak and its shiny underside? Penguox, I personally find it very odd for a Penguin creature to be in a desert. All three would all greatly benefit if they had more ecology to them, especially the subspecies. They really don't feel like they have a reason to be in the regions they are in. I'm giving them a 1.5/5
 * Jaggid: I can see you've tried to make them as special as they can for bugs. However, for them I personally find something off about them. The biggest problem to me is we don't really know how they can create full Armor Spheres from the mixtures of their secretions. And how can it store said heavy sphere in themselves? Stardust mixes stomach acid and ores/crystals to produce Confusion gas, how exactly? I can't see how that would happen. Arsenic Beetles, again, the creatures needs an explanation how it could create the Noxious Poison it releases. Like the drawings you made for them, they are simple creations that would have been much better with ecology and explanations for the things it does. I'm giving them a 2/5

Overall I would recommend you guys giving Endemic Life ecology for their pages, as I really want to know how these creatures do what they do and at least some things to make them sound like actual animals that live and have adapted in the environment they are in.