Thread:Gojira57/@comment-4732465-20170412201448/@comment-8985329-20170413100508

Perhaps I sound rude, but before you start complaining about other people's comments and deleting them because that's the only way you know to cope with criticism, think about what kind of image you want your monsters to give.
 * Calling it "Biotsune" doesn't help in the slightest. You perfectly know that Mizutsune exists, then why making a name that sounds just like it?
 * If you are writing "scientific names" having no idea about Latin or Greek just don't do it (you literally took a word in english and added a latin-esque suffix).
 * Lastly, no one cares about what you did or didn't do when creating the monster, writing your thoughts in the trivia won't make them relevant, and in case you want to add them because they somehow add interesting info about the concept, write "The author..." instead of your name.

Trying to avoid criticism won't make you improve, this is for good, learn your flaws so you can avoid them. Besides, I didn't complain about the concept, which is pretty interesting to be honest. You should make the big monster directly instead of caring about minions.