Talk:Corrupt Ukanlos/@comment-4212769-20160107211726

Seeing your monster I want to give you some thoughts to improve it. Your monster lacks creativity a lot and I want to show you why I think so.

First, try to make it more different from the original aside from color, size, and element. Like what could be different from adapting to other places than the Polar Zone or other frozen regions. The way it is right now is not really challenging and not much different to the fight against the original Ukanlos.

Second, it's said that it's weaker than the normal Ukanlos, then why is it that aggressive to strong monsters such as Elder Dragons and others?

There are also logical problems like how can there be an organ INSIDE the heart? It would decrease the efficiency of the heart a lot. Another thing is, how does it come from the heart to the mouth so that it is able to fire the beam? Also when it lives in groups of 3 to 4 how are they able to have Gore and Shagaru Magala as its main prey to sustain their power over the Frenzy Virus as those are very rare monsters?

At a side note, please try to watch your grammar, especially the difference between "it's" and "its".

There's a lot that lacks information and the potential of this idea isn't nearly used. Try harder and you can make it better. ^^