Thread:Nin10DillN64/@comment-15446856-20170720102720

Hi N10. As I can see you seem to be enjoying creating things here. That is good and all, but I have to point out things you're doing now.

You may not be ripping off things like Goji, aside from that one attack name on Sunset Arzuros, but this is a different issue.

Our main issue with you are the subs and variants your doing of Canon monsters, while their descriptions are detailed as they should be, they seem uninspired. What I mean is, its seems with them that you just took a canon monster and gave it a new element. And they are very random, like how does Shadowboxer Great Maccao gain the Dragon and Ice elements (Darkness) from becoming nocturnal? One thing that is lacking from those pages is a reason how they got their new ablities via an Ecology section.

As for your original monsters, they seem to lack the natural vibe Monster Hunter monsters have. Why did you make 7 Elder Dragons based on the Deadly Sins? Pentautarch shouldn't be able to even exist, as it has five heads and four legs. Sorry N10, you might have had much fun in making that, but its not Monster Hunter like in any way other than its elements and carves. Monster Hunter creates monsters that can be considered "epic" but also keep them logical too, like it could somehow exist in our world.

Please try and keep your monsters to this standard, it'll make them more likeable, thank you. 