Talk:Frag Brachydios/@comment-4212769-20160214162712

Hey, just wanted to point out some things. First I'd like to say that the monster is good. The concept is plausible and the monster looks cool. Just two little things are bad:

Generally spoken, the Notes section is, the way you use, it a Trivia section. Trivia is for things like how you got the idea and stuff, Notes are for more MH-ish things like "When this and this happens this and this occurs, etc.". For example "Baleful Gigginox cannot inflict paralysis when the head is wounded.".

The other thing is the effect of the muddy and blastblight together. As both gets inflicted rather frequently most of the fight would be struggling out of the mud and rolling the blast away. This would negatively affect the flow of the fight as you can hardly deal any damage in the same time you would kill another monster. Maybe you should half the time you are in the muddy state, or that the blastblight wears off when you roll in the muddy state twice more than without.

Except those two things the monster is great. Go on with the good work! ^^